You really have a knack for drawing backgrounds~ I was quite impressed by the amount of detail you put into them all, not to mention you opting to draw them all in the first place (vs. using stock photos or the like) despite this being your first VN! Having the character sprites all change color to match the current background was a nice touch; it helped everything to feel visually cohesive, heheh.
As for the story, talk about a cliffhanger of an ending~ I hope we get to see what becomes of Deca, her dreamy alter-ego, and her mysterious stalker (as well as her date, of course) someday!
i REALLY dig the art on this. it's so unique and expressive! all the dithering on the sprites and backgrounds as well. the slight shift in perspectives and the blending of singular and plural pronouns was really nice and natural! i want some of that pasta. all in all, goth bless butches
Though I'm not 100% on what happened at the end, or the meaning of being watched, I enjoyed reading this VN a lot, mainly for the cute lesbian pining of course but also for how on point and relatable that kind of routine is, especially when you have a disability or just feel stuck in general. Also I really like your art, especially the close-ups and the way you draw eyes!!! Thank you for making this.
Thank you so much for playing!! You really don't know how much this comment means to me. The repetitiveness of the routine was purposeful and supposed to resemble that of a "stuck" persons; the resemblance of a disabled persons' routine makes sense since it was loosely based off of mine! :3 Once again, thank you so much for playing.
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You really have a knack for drawing backgrounds~ I was quite impressed by the amount of detail you put into them all, not to mention you opting to draw them all in the first place (vs. using stock photos or the like) despite this being your first VN! Having the character sprites all change color to match the current background was a nice touch; it helped everything to feel visually cohesive, heheh.
As for the story, talk about a cliffhanger of an ending~ I hope we get to see what becomes of Deca, her dreamy alter-ego, and her mysterious stalker (as well as her date, of course) someday!
(also, I'm craving pasta now, heheheh)
THANK YOU, I’VE BEEN THINKING ABOUT HOW TO RESPOND FOR DAYS ON END AND I JUST WAAAAAAA TvT
Thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou!! I’ve got a plate ready just for you <3
i REALLY dig the art on this. it's so unique and expressive! all the dithering on the sprites and backgrounds as well. the slight shift in perspectives and the blending of singular and plural pronouns was really nice and natural! i want some of that pasta. all in all, goth bless butches
AAAAAAAAAA I'll make a fresh batch of pasta just for you! <3
your art is lovely
Thank you so much for playing :3
Though I'm not 100% on what happened at the end, or the meaning of being watched, I enjoyed reading this VN a lot, mainly for the cute lesbian pining of course but also for how on point and relatable that kind of routine is, especially when you have a disability or just feel stuck in general. Also I really like your art, especially the close-ups and the way you draw eyes!!! Thank you for making this.
Thank you so much for playing!! You really don't know how much this comment means to me. The repetitiveness of the routine was purposeful and supposed to resemble that of a "stuck" persons; the resemblance of a disabled persons' routine makes sense since it was loosely based off of mine! :3 Once again, thank you so much for playing.